SPH - BS Grade 7 English, Language A

A place for the short stories written by the grade 7 Language A, English students of Sekolah Pelita Harapan - Bukit Sentul, Indonesia.

Wednesday, December 14, 2005

Changes+Faith+Love+Some Weird Things=? - by Kezia


It was a sunny morning that day. The typical early mornings that was perfectly ideal for the start of a brand new day. Too bad, not much of the citizens in Colesto were awake to see the sun creeping up slowly towards the sky. But, for sure, an ordinary girl with an ordinary family was gazing upon the sky with a twinkle in her eyes.
“Wow! What a fantastic morning this is…” she said seeing through her window. She took a step backwards and saw that her twin brother was still hidden under his blanket and was still snoozing tightly with his pillows.
“Zack! Hey, Zack! Wake up you sloth!” said Mack loudly so that her twin would wake up.
“What?!” muttered Zack with his sleepy eyes half opened.
“What?! You’re saying what?! It’s 7 o’clock already! Wake up, take a shower, go down and have your breakfast! Then, we go to school. Quick!” said Mack, while she pulled Zack from his blue and green bed.
Zack went down from his bed and walked past Mack into the bathroom. Mack heard the sound of water coming out from the shower and she made a happy smile on her sweet face, proud that she can make her brother get up. Mack went down the stairs and sat down on the table to have her first meal that day.
“Morning Dad,” greeted Mack with again a smile on her face. “Morning Mom,”
“Morning dear…” replied Mr. and Mrs. Smith at the same time. “Where’s your brother, Mack?”
“He’ll be down soon.” answered Mack shortly.
Not long after that, Zack went down to have his breakfast. Mack only gave him 5 minutes to finish up because she didn’t like to be late, just because of Zack’s laziness.
They went down the street as soon as Zack said good-bye to his parents. It only took about 10 minutes to walk down the street and arrive at their school.
“Hey dude!” said a good-looking, tall boy to the Smith twins.
“Freddie… you surprised us!” said the twins together.
Freddie Jones, Mack and Zack were friends since childhood. They always went on the same school, same tutors, and same near places where they live. O yeah, there was also Kevin Clark. He was like Zack’s second twin. Everything they did, they did it all together. It’s funny of how Mack can get along with all those boys, but well, they’re born to be friends so different genders wouldn’t be any big deal…
* * * * *
Meanwhile, the same girl and boy twins were having a quarrel of who should take the dog for a walk outside. Mr. and Mrs. Candy were concerned of how their son and daughter had acted so they told Barley and Carmel to take the dog for a walk together.
Their family came from Orville and now they were new comers to Colesto. Their parents, Mr. and Mrs. Candy said that Colesto was a great town to live in, the citizens were nice, and every morning the sun always greets the people there bright fully and cheerfully.
Barley and Carmel took their dog, Pitch to walk on the park not far away from where the live. The dog ran here and there during his walk and the Candy twins were fed up with it. They were tired so they took a rest on a green bench laying down on the edge of the park with a big, old oak tree standing above it, giving a very soothing shade from the bright sunshine.
“Hmmm… What a tiring day… Glad to be here resting under this huge tree. Right, Barley?” said Carmel with a kind voice.
“Yeah… It has been so exhausting since the day we arrived here, right? Unpacking things, tidying up our new rooms, and other stuff,” said her twin brother. “What day is today?”
“Umm… Friday isn’t it?” answered Carmel.
“Oh… Then on Monday we’re going to start our new school?”
“I guess so. I’m still a little nervous and kind of not ‘ready’, you know?”
“Don’t worry, I feel the same thing too, Mel… But I think we would have a bunch of new friends to hang out with, just like in our old school in Orville. Think positive, sister!” calmed Barley.
So they went back home with Pitch after the little chit-chat that they had. But during their way home, they saw an advertisement that a new amusement park would be opened this Sunday. It was a brand new park, the first park that had ever existed in Colesto and it was totally interesting! Their hearts were filled with joy and enthusiasm. They can’t wait until Sunday comes and being present at the grand opening of the new Ark Park.

Again, the day starts up with a very bright yellowish smile from the sun on the sky up above. The weather was perfect for the grand opening of Ark Park. Hundreds and thousands of people intended to visit the Ark Park because it would be so sad if they miss the great grand opening of this new park.

* The Grand Opening of the Ark Park *

“Wow! This Park is amazing!” shouted Mack.
“Yeah!!!!” exclaimed Freddie, Kevin and Zack together.
“Thank goodness your father bought tickets for this day Freddie!” said Kevin.
“Yup! Thank him once again, Fred,” said Zack.
They decided on which ride would they play first because all the rides seemed very interesting and they were really excited about it. They played and enjoyed many games and rides.
It was 4 o’clock and the four of them were out of energy. Filled with joy and laughter inside their hearts, they decided to go home and take a rest for tomorrow’s school. When they were just about to go into their car, they met Carmel and Barley. The four of them bumped into each other but soon they apologized and later, they became friends.
The next day, the Smith twins along with Freddie and Kevin were surprised because the Candy twins were actually new students to their school! They were glad because they had new friends.
Days pasts by so fast, and without knowing it, months had also pasts by, and it had been exactly four months since the six of them met at the Ark Park. They said that they wanted to have the “Fourth Month of Friendship Anniversary”. So they’ve decided to held the anniversary party on where the y first met each other; the Ark Park.
“Wow… It had been 4 months, eh?” said Kevin.
“Yup… So fast wasn’t it?” said Barley.
“I’m just glad that we can be friends for this long…” said Mack
“Yes I fee-“
When Zack was just about to finish his sentence a sudden ZAP happened in the park! Flashes of light came suddenly from the dark eerie sky. But it seemed that the six of them were the only ones who saw it. All the other visitors looked just calm and fine.
“Did you see that?!” exclaimed Barley.
“Course I did!” said Carmel.
“What was that??!!?” shouted Zack.
Freddie was still starring at the sky and he soon saw some weird shinny creature that was coming towards them. When the creature was close enough, Freddie saw that there were two creatures. One was a colorful unicorn with a charming crown and the other was a human-like creature but she had transparent wings attached on her back.
“Hello fellows…” said the human-like ‘thing’.
“Who-o and wh-what are you?” said Freddie.
“Don’t be afraid. Me a Charmie… That’s what me people are called. Let me introduce me-self. Me name is Mo-rin Strife. This is me friend, Samvie Leonhart the Charmie Unicorn,” introduced Mo-rin.
Mo-rin had white long hair and she was dressed like an elegant princess. She looked gorgeous and she was only a teenager. The unicorn, Samvie looked marvelous with all those colors covering his whole body. Both Mo-rin and Samvie had sparkles and glitters on their bodies; they said that all Charmiez (plural for a Charmie) should have them.
“Where do you come from Mo-rin?” asked Carmel curiously.
“Like me said before… Me a Charmie… Me and Samvie come from Charmiez. Me think it’s like 100,000,000,000 miles from this green earth. It had been a long, long journey you know. But me glad that we’re finally here now,” answered Mo-rin.
By this fascinating incident, every night, the six best friends always came to visit the hill near the Ark Park because that was the place where Mo-rin and her unicorn were staying while they were on earth.
Like before, days pasts by really, really fast and then a few weeks pasts by. It was time for the two Charmiez to come home to where they come from. It was time for good-bye…
“Thanks guys, for making my time here so great and monderful. I won’t forget all of you in my life,” said Mo-rin.
All of them hugged each other and Samvie also came and licked all of the six pals. Mo-rin and Samvie returned home after the farewell… Mack, Zack, Barley, Carmel, Freddie and last Kevin thought that it was very weird to have so many things happening in their life in an instant. But they thought that maybe it happened to them so that they can know more about friendship.
Maybe you think this is a funny and weird story. The story that has a weird ending but this story was only meant to teach about friendship. Last, they all lived happily ever after with being friends all their life…
As you notice, the title of the story had a question mark on it. Maybe you can answer it after reading this right? Yup! The answer is F.R.I.E.N.D.S.H.I.P

Hahahaha… Weird right? Well, this is the end of the story… Like any other stories,
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1 Comments:

Anonymous Anonymous said...

lumayan, not bad for 7 graders

8:46 PM  

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